REMEMBER:

When writing an Officer Fitrep or Enlisted Evaluation bullet it should be in this format:

Action verb. object of the action.results/impact of the action

You Must answer the so what? question

Unparalleled expertise in the power plant work center. Sought out by all for his technical knowledge. Already performing at the level of a CPO.

Vigorously tackles any assignment. Very detail oriented, excels under pressure.

Active member of the Command Assessment Team. Her aggressive influence in the command, increased retention by 55% during this reporting period.

Role model Sailor motivated, genuine and honest. Immaculate uniform appearance.  Outstanding on semi-annual  (PRT).

Willing assumes all challenges, with enthusiasm and determination. Through her training program the department attained 100% ESWS qualifications.

Team builder. Her positive attitude, can-do spirit, greatly contributed to the command receiving the Battle

Through his superior leadership, the department overall retention and advancement rates exceed navy norms by 25%.

Makes a difference. As 1st LPO Smith volunteered to take possession of the ships HAZMAT locker. He cleaned, remodeled, and painted it, which resulted in a very clean organized, and functional HAZMAT locker.

Ranked 1 of 90 highly competitive Chief Petty Officers at this command. Performing at the Master Chief level now!

Most qualified Sailor at this command! My most dependable EOOW. Lead trainer with DCTT, ECTT and ESWS qualifications for 1,000 Sailors.

Goes above and beyond. As MWR Officer he planned, organized, and lead 12 MWR tours for the 5 port visits GUARDIAN made on her deployment.

Recognized professional expert on USS NEVERSAIL.

Sought out by all levels of the chain of command to resolve both technical and personnel issues.  Selected by the Executive Officer and CHENG, to fill the MPA billet.

A model of military bearing and Navy tradition. Loyal, trustworthy, and dedicated, he is roll model for all to follow.

Mentors over 200 Sailors in life skills and professional development, 25 advanced and two were Sailors of the Year.

Built a performing unit drill team involving 175 first term Sailors. Command drill team traveled to 12 different states promoting recruiting and Navy opportunities.

Superb leader! As Department LCPO, his Sailors attained an overall retention rate of 85%, while 63% advanced. Compared the Navys retention rate of 45% and 23% advancement.

A leader in the community as PTA President and Little League Coach.

Recognized Expert: EN1 Smith is sought after by both other divisions AND other ships for his amazing ability to correct problems and make things work.

Meticulous worker. GM2 Smith received high praise from Atlantic Fleet Inspectors impressed with his meticulous attention to detail when servicing his weapons.

Ready for Action. With GM2 Smith in charge of DG01 the armory was consistently in an Operational Ready status and ready for force protection issue.

Precise Administrator. Maintains USS NEVERSAILs ammunition administration at the highest degree of readiness.

Motivated Trainer. Petty Officer Smith was directly responsible for qualifying 70% of the crew in 9mm, M-14 and Shotgun; and 25% of the crew in 50cal and M-60.

-Proactive. MN2 SmithX was responsible for initiating and completing the job of replacing a $35,000 magazine sprinkler valve.

FXP’s to include 35 Dive evolutions and 12 Demolition operations.

Aggressively sought out personal qualifications to include SCUBA Dive Supervisor, Demolitions Operations Supervisor, Command Duty Officer, Small Boat Coxswain, and Naval Parachutist.

HM2 Smith is a dependable and highly motivated self-starter. He utilizes his time wisely to further both his Surface Warfare skills and rating knowledge.

Takes a well-planned approach to complete his required tasking well ahead of time.

Professional appearance and conduct both in and out of uniform.

Proactive in his qualifications, in the short time onboard HM2 has earned numerous qualifications to better serve the Command.

Highly motivated and driven young sailor!

Completes all assigned tasks on time and ahead of schedule

Takes pride in his work, GM2 routinely sacrifices his personal time to go the extra mile for the benefit of the Department and Command.

GM2 Smith is an excellent sailor and a dependable asset to his Department, his drive and initiative are an outstanding example for his peers and subordinates.

Far Reaching Responsibility: EM1 carries responsibility over every single space aboard USS NEVERSAIL, including both main spaces and the galley. This was evident the his recent griddle, oven, search light, MPAC, and #2 switchboard repair.

Involved in the Community: EM1 Smith is always the first to sign up for both COMREL projects and volunteer events.

Program Manager: As Electrical Safety Officer and Tag Out Program Manager, he effectively managed both programs thereby greatly contributing to the ships successful 3M inspection.

Keen Technical Insight: Supervised and managed the complete change out of one of three diesel generators

Natural Leader: During the recent Underway Demonstration EN1 Smiths leadership ability as EOOW resulted in USS NEVERSAIL receiving the score of “OUTSTANDING” from the PACFLT N82 inspection team. No other ship in the PACFLT has this honor or title.

Flawless Performer: During a recent Diesel Engine Inspection his 2 Main propulsion Diesel Engine was hailed as “flawless” by the senior Inspector.

Meticulously processed and tracked 1,500 ammunition transactions and 400 cross-country weapon shipments without error.

Skillful administrator. As Work Center Supervisor, Petty Officer Smith implemented three force revisions and managed a 100% accomplishment rate for 720 planned maintenance requirements.

My number one Senior Chief Petty Officer! Senior Chief Smith would be my number one SCPO in any size peer group.

As President of the First Class Petty Officers Association, PO Smith was responsible for raising over $1,500.00 to help pay for the Command Christmas Party.

Proactive. MN2 Smiths ammunition administration a the highest degree of readiness.

Motivated Trainer. Petty Officer Smith was directly responsible for qualifying 70% of the crew in 9mm, M-14 and Shotgun; and 25% of the crew in 50cal and M-60.

Lead absentee voter training, administered DON surveys, and tracked the voter registration status of 130 personnel. His efforts ensure 100% compliance and contact. with Federal regulations and met the CNO’s objective of 100% contact.

Organized and managed the training and subsequent qualification of 89 command members on the use of the MK-102 insuring USS NEVERSAIL was ready for her upcoming deployment

Volunteers countless hours per week restocking the command’s MWR snack mess.

Meticulously processed and tracked 1,500 ammunition transactions and 400 cross-country weapon shipments without error.

Skillful administrator.As Work Center Supervisor, Petty Officer Smith implemented three force revisions and managed a 100% accomplishment rate for 720 planned maintenance requirements.

My number one Senior Chief Petty Officer! Senior Chief Smith would be my number one SCPO in any size peer group.

As President of the First Class Petty Officers Association, PO Smith was responsible for raising over $1,500.00 to help pay for the Command Christmas Party.